January 23, 2011 at 11:23 pm
#34992
Participant
Your cover letter is very good. You should check the grammar though as there are certainly several mistakes in every paragraph eg. Para. 1 – ’employer to’ should be ’employee for’; Para. 2 – ‘with high dedication’ should be ‘highly dedicated’.
It may also be worth considering cutting down some of the length by amalgamating the second and third paragraphs.